Jessica Drew A2 Media
Candidate Number: 5075 Centre Number: 22357
Magazine Advert Creation




Here are some of the different versions I tried, some of them weren't as good as others so I used the good aspects of the different versions to make a final product.

With this version I tried to make it look more vintage style, but it is too dark and it makes the left side of her face to dark. Also I think it is a bit too overcrowded, i think there is too much text. Also the grammar is incorrect where I have put 'Something Your Not' as it should be 'Something You're Not'.

The problems with this version are, the quote isn't very clear because it overlaps many different colours on the background image which doesn't work. Also the grammar is incorrect where I have put 'Something Your Not' as it should be 'Something You're Not'. It is also still too crowded.
Apart from this, there isn'y alot else wrong with it i think the image looks very clear and it is edited well and the fonts and text is clear.

I moved the quote on this version, but it doesn't work as I think it should be central. It is also still too crowded.
Apart from that i think everthing else about this version is fine.